The sister in the kitchen and the gal in the bathroom are two great examples of how you give your keyholders powerful and distinctive voices. That adds so much to these scenes.
Thanks; I really appreciate that feedback. I try to make sure that those 'voices' are not just infinite copies of one fantasy girl. There are many facets to be explored.
The sister in the kitchen and the gal in the bathroom are two great examples of how you give your keyholders powerful and distinctive voices. That adds so much to these scenes.
ReplyDeleteThanks; I really appreciate that feedback. I try to make sure that those 'voices' are not just infinite copies of one fantasy girl. There are many facets to be explored.
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