You clearly conveyed that the girl is uneasy at first but slowly warming to the idea. I'm sure that after one session she'll know what she wants for the next three months. And the fact that his cage is 'tiny' just added to the impact.
Sometimes the picture itself puts the story into my mind ... this girl has such a lovely smile: thrilled but a bit unsure at the same time. She didn't look to me like a girl who would DECIDE to lock a man up ... so the idea of having her benefit from someone else having done it seemed a good one.
You clearly conveyed that the girl is uneasy at first but slowly warming to the idea. I'm sure that after one session she'll know what she wants for the next three months. And the fact that his cage is 'tiny' just added to the impact.
ReplyDeleteSometimes the picture itself puts the story into my mind ... this girl has such a lovely smile: thrilled but a bit unsure at the same time. She didn't look to me like a girl who would DECIDE to lock a man up ... so the idea of having her benefit from someone else having done it seemed a good one.
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