Thanks for all the replies for my chastity
caption competition; it's been great to see the ideas that have come in. I'll
go through the suggestions individually.
Ca5h3w31 suggested (and Nicholas
Wolfwood supported) the idea of doing captions based on the sex mage universe.
I hadn't heard of that but Google took care of that. It's a fictional world
where women have certain psychic powers enabling compulsion of men. This isn't
really a theme I'm into, I'm afraid, because to me the idea of compulsion
rather takes the fun away. The beauty of chastity is that the male has
complicity in his own denigration, whether it be loss of orgasms, corporal
punishment, humiliation or strap-on buggery: in each captioned pic, I make sure
that at some stage the man at least to some extent made a decision that allowed
that to happen. The beauty of chastity in my mind is that the control that
women exert over us comes not from psychic powers but from simply being women.
The scenarios I illustrate are ones where that control may be quite extreme -
the women are cruel, capricious and deliciously and unashamedly selfish - but
the capture was voluntary. Every man my female narrators are addressing their
remarks to has had the opportunity to bitterly regret their own acceptance of
their submission, but they all DID accept it. They were never compelled.
Totaldiscord suggested "How about
the keyholder teasing her chastity boytoy through his cage, or threatening
to... finally agreeing to give him that long-awaited blowjob, but without
taking his cage off first. Keyholders who lick and kiss their boy's locked up
cocks are the meanest!" OK, that's do-able; result is at No 631.
Steve1
suggested "I like the idea that a girl finally convinces her
boyfriend into chastity, and then once he's locked she starts passing him
around her friends; maybe he has to please all of them and have them all agree
before he earns an orgasm. And of course at least one of the friends has always
secretly hated him..." I've
addressed similar issues in the past, but it's worth another look so I did No
632. I also thought of something from the "secretly hated him" bit
... which is at No 633.
Throne said "I'd love to see you
explore the cuckolding theme. The wife could be using unfair arguments to
justify keeping her husband chaste, teased, and endlessly frustrated."
This is a well-trodden path, both by me and others (ptathuk apparently found he
had so many cuckold ones that he split his blog into cuckold and non-cuckold
blogs). However the idea of unfair arguments presses my buttons, so I've done a
couple more at Nos 634 and 635.
ChrisM10 contributed "I always find
it very exciting when the woman is part of something 'bigger', like an
organization or company specializing in life-coaching via chastity or even a
weird branch of the government. And while the woman conducting the regular
check-ups would of course be very flirty and touchy-feely, the knowledge that
they will never budge from the terms agreed upon, adds a level of hopelessness
to the fantasy for me." While I'm not much interested in writing
sci-fi/fantasy stuff about organisations of women dominating the world's men
and keeping them locked in chastity (altairboy's chastity stories collection
always has a few like this, which frankly I find a bit of a snore), I came up
with something based on this suggestion that might interest you. The result is
at No 636. Incidentally the only 'fantasy' aspect of my writing is the use of
the 'Hardsteel' chastity device, which is a piece of shorthand I came up with
to avoid constantly having to re-cover descriptions of just how unremovable a
device might be. Let's face it, the concept of a permanently unremovable
chastity device is technically impossible but a huge turn-on, which is a very
useful plot device, so I simply brought one into existence by author's fiat. If
you search the Web for a purveyor of these marvellous products, you will
unfortunately search in vain.
zerat14 came up with "Any of these
would be so awesome: 1. Husband and wife both in chastity with their maid as
the keyholder. Maybe the wife was the mistress and wanted to tease the husband
with a little lesbian action with the maid but she turns her into her slave. Or
maybe she seduced them one by one and now she is their live in pampered
mistress. 2. Master and slave switch
roles for whatever reaseon(just to try it or a wager) and now that he is in
chastity there is no going back.
3.Escape artist with his new assistant/girlfriend helping him train. The
only time he is out of chastity is when he is in heavy bondage and she is
teasing the hell out of him. He only gets to cum if he escapes. Poor thing
didn't cum in a very long time and he used to be so good at it. :)" The
third one is a little obscure but I liked the first two a lot. I thought I'd
written something like your first idea before, but it turned out it was a
script for a Milovana series I never got around to actually attaching pics to.
I've got a few of those which I could convert to series on this blog I suppose.
I wrote a few for Milovana but chastity seems to be a bit of a side-issue there
to teasing ... the audience there prefer Tease but no Denial, and all too many
of the posts - including those that are voted winners - seem to me to be just
"ten wanks with the left hand. Then ten with the right. Then ten standing
on your head. Now cum. Good boy." etc. etc. Zzzzzz. What do people think
of me writing series of captions? I've avoided doing that with one exception:
the Indian girls at Nos 196 to 198. I love Indian girls, largely due to having
a very dear Indian friend who is tiny, yet kicks ass as a corporate high-flyer.
She occasionally has been talked into playing with chastity, and the results
were spectacular! Anyway, I digress. zerat, I wrote a couple of caps on your
first and second ideas ... results at Nos 637 and 638; see what you think.
Edward Nygma19 sent three ideas:
"The general idea of switching roles like zerat suggested has always been
very appealing to me, especially the revenge-theme. Suggestion: A successful
lawyer has his secretary work really hard and doesn't pay her much. He secretly
lives a chastity-lifestyle and has been sending his keys to different
pro-dommes to keep him chaste for quite some time. One day, the keys are
accidentally sent back to his office. His secretary opens the package and finds
out about his fetish. 2. The girl Brad always used to taunt and make fun of in
school turns out to be really hot some years later. She also happens to be in
charge of the research project on long-term-chastity he volunteered for. 3. A
gangster-couple just made a lot of money with a robbery. But he betrays her,
takes all of the money and drives away to leave the country. He gets into an
accident and wakes up several hours later, completely stuck in a
full-body-cast, lying on the bed of their former hideout and unable to move.
She informs him that he’s gonna be teased without release for revenge, at least
until his healing process is completed." The third one is not my cup of
tea, as the guy doesn't ever choose chastity ... and it sounds a bit like the
terrible movie Boxing Helena. The first of your ideas is the one I like best,
though I've explored similar ideas in the past: see Nos (search:
"secretary"). Worth dipping into again though, hence No 639. The
second is worth doing though I'm going to change the "he volunteered
for" bit ... I prefer chastity when it is personal rather than signing up
for it with a faceless org. Incidentally re "Brad", I try to avoid
naming the person the girl is speaking to. In fact I try to avoid classifying
the listener as tall short, old young etc., because I think it helps the reader
to live in the fantasy better if there is not a potentially jarring discord
between their reality and the addressee described by the woman. Sometimes I get
stuck though ... I've done a few "father of my girlfriend" ones,
where it's hard for the girl not to address the listener as "Mr.
so-and-so". Anyway, I did a cap of this, it is at No 640.
ChasteVirgin4 said "As a chaste
Virgin, anything involving virgins in chastity is incredible, there's not much
out there and more would be great. I'm thinking a young virgin goes to
university/college and ends up locked by a cruel teasing girl or group of
girls, could be fun." A really interesting general concept, and one I
hadn't really considered much before. I think I'd done one cap where the victim
was a virgin, but this comment sparked my imagination quite a bit. I eventually
did five caps on the theme of virgins being locked up in chastity. You'll find
them at Nos 641 to 645. This suggestion gets my nod as the overall winner. Congrats,
ChasteVirgin4 and thanks to all who contributed: I hope you like the resulting
Chastity Caps I did.
No idea what happened about (with my name). Signed in properly now. Just delete the above.
ReplyDeleteAwesome, great that you loved my idea and I basically "won". This has been an awesome sort of event and I hope you do something similar in the future.
As far as series goes, I say yeah go for a few series. So long as the concept's good enough to keep us interested then I'm for it. But I'd say stick some individual ones in too, for good measure.
Cheers again.
ChasteVirgin: no problem, I deleted the comment with the odd sign-in. Glad you liked the competition, and thanks for your winning suggestion.
ReplyDeleteOk first off Compliments to the Chef. All the captions. Nom! Nom! Nom! As for mine
ReplyDelete637 - making her foreign and not good at english - You Sir are a mind reader. I tought of writing it down but you said keep it simple and general so i didn't. Seeing a series of this would be prefect. Go for it.
638 - OMG. The picture is fantastic. The little collar with the bell. She is after all a slave and this is only Secretaries' Day/Week/Motnh/... Eternity :evilgrin: . I can so see her still calling him "Master" while she's teasing the hell out of him.
As for my third idea I don't even know how to explain it. It keeps changing in my mind. Best i can do is give you the link to the story that started the fantasy http://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/challenge.html There is no chastity in it and its short but it does something for me.
Milovana i agree it is a "bit"(read a lot) boring, but there are gems. I adore tease from 1885 and most from cactusman. They are more story/fantasy based then the "wank-wank-cum good boy" rest. If you havent seen them check them out. If you ever get around to publishing the tease i would love to see it.
Once again Congrats!